杨龙 发表于 2024-6-10 00:28   全显示 1楼
前面对男主的背景介绍的不够，为啥长公主会招猪脚做驸马，看陈家的实力，刨除长公主的实力其实并不如何出众，所以这块有些突兀，另外五公主和七公主都是通天高手，按照本书的实力背景，送出的也太简单了，并没有获取相应的收益，这块总感觉有点强行了，还有刚开局出场的高手就太多了，通天一堆，玄天都出来两个了，后面最好能在该框架下处理好剧情推演和主角的升级逻辑，否则容易出现前面玄天就是顶了，后面玄天不如狗的情况，一点浅见，见笑。。。
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